In this city

30 Aug

From a bus through the city,
I saw its poverty.
From the depths of my heart,
A line, “So sad!”
A moment of thought, “Better try to
Craft a good Haiku.”
Then to let the sight, the thought, the emotion
Fade into oblivion.
For the bus has to move on, and so do I,
To my future, which I wait to see.
To ignore and to forget, I am used to.
What do you say ? Aren’t you ?

 

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16 Responses to “In this city”

  1. cinnamon blues August 30, 2011 at 10:47 pm #

    I like the flow and sense of the poem. It drew me in straight away πŸ™‚

    • nithvarma August 31, 2011 at 5:32 pm #

      Thank you! Keep coming back! πŸ™‚

  2. ashbeezone August 30, 2011 at 11:04 pm #

    Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
    Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

    • nithvarma August 31, 2011 at 5:33 pm #

      Thank you very much! πŸ™‚

  3. The Noiseless Cuckooclock August 30, 2011 at 11:28 pm #

    beautiful wit in your words…

    agreed mostly.
    πŸ™‚

  4. The Oldstrong August 31, 2011 at 12:40 pm #

    Unfortunately all too often this is a sad truth

  5. Ina August 31, 2011 at 8:21 pm #

    If the difference between rich and poor is too big, there is something not right! Politics should be about improving their lives, and pay for it by taxes for the rich. (As an answer to your question. I am glad you took this issue as theme. ) Very good poem on social unfairness!

    • nithvarma September 2, 2011 at 11:47 am #

      Thank you very much for the encouraging words! πŸ™‚

  6. Akshar Varma September 2, 2011 at 7:14 pm #

    sure it was a spur of da moment poem and its great!! keep writing!!!
    urs r da only poems i read….

    • Nithin September 2, 2011 at 7:19 pm #

      Thank you Akshar!! πŸ™‚

  7. Elyas Mulu Kiros September 3, 2011 at 1:15 pm #

    This is very deep! Well done! I really like it .. it not only has poetic beauty, but it is also socially conscious! Thanks for sharing!

    • nithvarma September 3, 2011 at 5:31 pm #

      Thank you Elyas! Keep coming back! πŸ™‚

  8. Vinod Narayan September 7, 2011 at 10:33 am #

    Nithin,

    Your lines have an element of truth that is is fast fading from the world. Hold on to it; it is worth every bit!

    • nithvarma September 7, 2011 at 7:24 pm #

      Thank you very much, Vinod! πŸ™‚

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